Should business ideas pitched to venture capitalists be narrated in 2nd person or 3rd person?
One does not actually sell the product/service to the VC, but in a sense it does "sell" the whole business idea.
So, should one use:
"NewCorp enables you to do unthinkable things in a matter of minutes.."
or
"NewCorp enables users to do unthinkable things in a matter of minutes.."?
IF you think your service is something they might personally use:
"NewCorp enables you to do unthinkable things in a matter of minutes.."
If not:
"NewCorp enables users to do unthinkable things in a matter of minutes.."?